"Performance, Feedback, Revision"

To me revision is just going back through a paper I've written and improving it in as many aspects as possible. For starters, grammar is usually the initial revision and with this I tend to check if the paper flows well based on the words I use to get my point across. Aside from flow I also look at the points I have highlighted and decide whether I want to keep those points in the first place. After getting feedback, some points may not be viable anymore and thus I feel I should change up my writing. Along with the revision comes the sense of precision as well because by that time you know exactly what you want to say and are able to 'clean' up your writing so it fits  your criteria.